First Flourishing

wow that was... very good for a first time forishing video

you did really good dude. the moves were better than the editing though, you spent too much time with the "black screen" in between moves. and it cut to a black screen in between EVERY MOVE. would've loved to see you develop some flow and do a couple moves in a routine in one shot. anyways not bad 'tall for a first video. keep on kuttin' 3/5 from me dogg.

amazing....!

I gotta say that doesn't look like a first flourishing video. How long have you been flourishing before you made that? If I were to judge I'd say no less than a year, 8 months min.

Me likely. If you continue like this, I may have to watch out for you in the future. The move at 1:05, was great. 4/5

veeery nice....

this is grerat 5/5 how long you been flourishing?

1 year exactly =) The video was filmed using a camera phone using adobe premier elements(which came free with the phone) to edit. I hope to get a decent cam if money allows and probably a better editing software. Thanks so much for the comments guys, much appreciated =).

My youtube account is nastydodger, do check me out when you got time, comments welcome. THANKS again!

Work on the tornado, rest is fine. But don't have too much madonna-style moves in your arsenal. I would like to see more variety. Nice performance.

this is a good example of how everyone's "first video" should look like. good job. practice before show :)

I liked it, I only really saw 1 or 2 "madonna-style" moves, though it did get a little same old towards the end. This problem could easily be solved with some nice editing to change up the video, the problem with most videos that showcase similar moves is that they just drag on. With some nice editing you don't really need that much content to make an amazing video. I just hope my first video when it comes time to make one is as good as this one.

Keep them coming guys =)

Your video is great, just when it comes to flourishing, we all do it, so technical ability is rarely what impresses us. Laymen love seeing a million cuts, but when you don't really present original material, presentation is what keeps people interested. This is why people like Jordan Lapping, who doesn't do a lot of his own material, focus' on the presentation of his videos which is what makes them entertaining regardless if I've seen the cuts 1000 times. The video was great, I just thought some constructive criticism would be more useful that "IT'S AWESOME" because that doesn't help you get better now does it?

OOPS forgot to credit lepaul, oh and one of my cuts were inspired by Allan D =)

Crazy ****! I love it, it inspired me to go on, thanks man! -Fexosos

amazing. very nice. loved the smoothness of the moves, and you must have a good qulity phone if thats the final result. song name?

Saeglopur- by sigur ross Phone is nokia n93i

You got some really slick moves in there. I'm not going to comment on the editing because it's already been said. But you have some serious skills. How long have you been flourishing?

How long ago did you submit this video, caus my video ain't even on here yet and i uploaded it over a week ago ?? Has anyone else had that trouble ?

i submitted 24 hours ago and it was posted i think a few hrs after? not sure i went to sleep after posting this and woke up next morning to it being posted

I really dig this video 5 from me loved your style.

The only bad thing about it was the not so good camera. It is good, but the stuff you were doing, should have been done with a nicer camera, because it would have made it better, and the blacknees wasnt cool. Anyways GREAT job!