theory11 contest entry

It was really slow and you struggled a lot. Nice effort though.

The flourishes were not smooth at all and did not flow well. They were very choppy and there was a lot of hesitation and fumbling. Practice more. The editing was okay, I suppose. Sorry, but it wasn't very good. You know what you have to do, but you have not committed it to muscle memory yet, which will make them look smooth and make it look like you're not even trying. And the only way to do that is practice over and over and over until you get suck of the darn cut...and then practice some more. Best wishes, Ryan

dude you dont need to put in 3 entries to win

wat are you doing a tutoial?

i know dude you shouldnt even be in a 4 year old contest

cool moves

Is this a joke?

Sorry its not the standard of some of the other entries, keep it up though.

You should practice more before making a flourish video... People shouldn't be thinking "A contest! GREAT!! I actually know I'll never win, but I'll just enter for the heck of it...". Thats will just make you waste alot of hours that could have been used on practicing... 1/5

I agree with the rest of these guys. Instead of filming, you should be practicing more.

keep working on flourishes. but dont do it in front of a camera

you simply need to buy a dvd with professional moves on it, or find some decent tutorials, instead of making up moves, especially when youre just starting out

hmm... yea i agree with the other guys but keep trying

guys respect him, at least he tried, why dont you submit a video? nickmagic

most of flourishes or else is not very smooth.. You need more practice.

watch' you should practice much more before you make a flourish vid.. the moovs was so slow that my eyes pain... that was really bad, the forst cut was lame actually that vid was poor' practice more... 1/5

um o.k. I'll foret I watched this

nice tutorial...

ahah......

cmon man at least memorize the cut

Gomeriffic, you owe me 1min 29secs of my life and I want it back.

well...you could put some work into this...try to get smooth and fluid before you film

That was pretty damn ugly. I thought I was unsmooth with flourishes, but wow!

Just keep up the practicing man... I agree with all the above

Bleh! Keep practicing. You might get there, but WOW. The video, eck!

good try with the video dude. but practice is obviously necessary. i like to think of videos as a "here's what i've learned...give me advice on how to improve" not "here's a video of me practicing some new material i've been doing for a week" cuz no one wants to watch you practice. i look forward to another video after you get those cuts more fluid tho. especially that one off your chest. that'd be freaking awesome up to speed. peace.

Keep up the good work :)

keep working, ur still young. ps dont listen to the bad comments every one starts some where

Practice alot more. 1 star.

Practice man, that's the most important thing, I know this video's old and you're probably much better now. Good luck flourishing in the future.

super slow

bacon!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm sorry man but that was really bad. You really need to practice before putting up a video in general let alone a contest. Did you really expect to win with this submission? I mean really. Sorry if that sounded harsh but it's true.

you are very young... I am 15 years old but learn more new tricks and take it faster!!! Sorry but it is very bad

That was pretty bad.

painful flourishes painful music 1/5

That wasn't good... execution of flourishes was just... HORRIBLE. I'm sorry, but that really was BAD. 1/5.