Very nice trick. The actual wording of the presentation is good, but you need to add your own voice. Imagine you were having a conversation with someone. You wouldn't speak in a monotone voice, would you? Remember, that magic is just a medium for you to interact with your spectator. Keep in mind that your job is to become the spectators friend, so, make them a friend, Speak in a colorful tone of voice, and talk about things that captivate your audience, provided they relate to the trick. Oh, and cut the part about how all the cards are different. You can casually spread the cards, but that need not be stated as it draws attention the the normality of the deck. Nice job overall.

4/5

Nice trick, i enjoyed it greatly.!

Very smooth.
As Dmagic said, your patter could be better.

Keep up the good work (if your patter flows well with the sleights, then hats-off to you)

i didn't find it anything amazing. i like the helter skelter better.

I thought the change was great! Nice job man.

Very good! Watch the thumb though;) You know what I mean

That was really good man. Nice job!